Glancing through the window the whole day, Jamie didn’t see Patrick returning any time soon. She remembered he left in such urgency the other night not even telling here about his whereabouts. After a long wait, she heard sounds of car in the garage, rushing to open the door, she saw him looking like a mess with his hair rumpled and unshaven beard with his attire all disheveled still making him look a smoldering devil. Jamie asked “why didn’t you return the whole damn night? I was scared.” Patrick without paying heed to her moved past her. She couldn’t bear his hatred; she had to ask him his reason for being arrogant, dissolute and no good. Putting her hands to his lapel she asked him to look in her eyes, he pushed her away not wanting to see her tears dropping like a water fool. He hated her tears she was saying “listen to me; please you have not uttered a word since you went without notice. It’s killing me seeing you not saying something, Damn you! Spit out what is troubling you, shout all you want but just don’t keep it inside yourself.” He looked straight into her eyes, he knew that instant he couldn’t ever walk away making her feel this way without blurting out his good intentions, turned bad. He responded, “we both have been trying to strangle each other Jamie & I thought you needed a bit space that’s why I left, I should have known that whole night without you was a torture; I couldn’t have tried to solve our difference but I was silly to think walking away will help rather see it made you gloomy and vulnerable. I am a horrid man I know and I wouldn’t dare to do again unless you start snoring like your grandma; Remember she takes a minute to sleep followed by dangerous sounds of growling, literally once I had to run away for my life thinking she ‘ll eat me up.” Chuckling he caressed her face and waited for her to reply, She calmly said,” you did the right thing, if you hadn’t left maybe, I wouldn’t have ever known how much I crave your presence but don’t you ever do this again vile man c’mon swear on my breath” .With that they both laughed and continued pouring their hearts out..
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66 thoughts on “A Short scene!

    1. Haha thank you I thought it was okish but this comment made my day..I ll somebody write a book and it would be NY bestseller & for that to achieve I have to read & write alot till I grasp the power to make an impact :p

      And good to have you here! ! 🙂

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      1. Always remember; that across the horizon lives a soul who wishes best for you and luck to follow. I wish and hope you achieve what you desire and learn, grasp what all you can to be the best.
        I might not be here always but my wishes and blessing will be with you forever.
        Damn, why do I have so much of emotional rush in me.. 🙂

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      2. Hahah that emotional rush is in me as well I call it demons den !! :p
        That’s so sweet of you Bobby but you aren’t going anywhere I know keep WPing on & off here okay ? 🙂

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      3. I can, but the thing is I don’t get time to do so.. I have couple of films on edit and then I don’t get the poetic interaction with the writers where you tend to share thought, muse and etc. Blogging is like; like, comment , smile and turn off. I might be wrong but this is what I feel.

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      4. 😂😂😂
        Okay you are write on this. .Sometimes it’s all nerve wrecking. Liking & commenting and it sucks !!!
        For me after office this blogging n novelling kills time

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      5. Overnight you can’t get critics here Bobby this WP demands time it’s attention seeker lol 😀
        And after 7 months here now I have got few people to interact lol ,now you can imagine I am also a snail speed blogger

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      6. Hahha yeah but i hope here I am a cloud with a silver lining 😜😜😝😝
        Don’t fret! ! Sometimes enjoy blogging 😞😞😎😎

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      7. We don’t have working hours…
        sometimes, I go early morning around 9 am and come home by 1 am in the night. Sometimes, I don’t go, Sometimes, I go late and come early. So, the timings are not obvious for me or say film makers. But when we work, Its time consuming and tiring to get home and go on with something. We have no weekends or public holiday’s to cherish..
        I guess this much is enough of me crying over this.. lol

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      8. But you get handsomely payed right! Hahah
        This is tough, you can cry and get over this okay 😀

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      9. Yes, But not to everyone..
        lets consider Ad (Asst directors) AE (Asst editors) don’t get paid that often, Handsomely getting payed is on the other plate. I have worked 3 years for free just to seek experience and now that i have 13 films on my credit list, I don’t get payed that good. ( Yashraj sucks) or say other producers who just use creative people to build their dream exploit. Film making is not what it looks. believe me.. There is fun but again there is many things to it too.

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      10. Yeah there is always some bad aspects attached 😦
        I can pray that you get what you want and hard work pays off 🙂
        Everything will go alright for you 🙂

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      11. What a smile … Tum itna joh muskura rahe ho , kya gam hai jisko chupa rahe ho..? Lol , my Hindi sucks.. pardon me if I spell wrong :p

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      12. Hahah I don’t know hindi lol but I think sahi likha ha..hhaha
        Gham atay jatay han abhe adat ha esay jeenay main :p

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      13. Maine dil se kahan dhund laye khusi na samjh laya gam toh gam he sahi..
        Lol, it seems we are playing antakshari. Two vella’s trying to kill time by this non sense Hindi emotional songs.. hahaha.
        I have laughed so much after a while !!

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      14. Hahah I had watched hindi drama in my teenage years but he seems like you are more worst then me in this department. .hahahha

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      1. Hahaha.. Nope, that’s not the issue.
        Actually, I was waiting for the Champions league final to start, And when it did, I logged off..
        I saw it today and I was confused about the Question.
        Anyways, I had a off yesterday and today.

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      1. Ohh awesome.. Will read it right now! Sorry if my enthusiasm is a bit intimidating :p i havent been this fascinated by shorts until now 🙂 heheh

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