Intrigue with precept
Precept with a thrill
A Thrill with beauty
Beauty with stains
Stains but a stare
A stare with gaze
Gaze with hope
Hope with a measure
A measure with a wave
A wave but an edge
An edge with warrant
A warrant with no bail
A bail of forgery
Forgery worth condemn
A condemn with furry
A furry but an end
An end with redemption
Redemption of reality
A reality with rust
Rust with figments
Figments with a fiction
A Fiction but a tale
The tale was a ride
A ride with message
A message with strength
Strength but beauty !
How ! How do you do this ! 😀 You are really blessed by God, Izza. Always cherish this gift you have. I was about to take a nap when I saw there is a new post by you. I jumped out of bed to read it and as expected, as good as it can get 🙂
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haha! you never cease to amaze me 😛 Oh please! Whenever i see you writing with such zeal I say the same! But thank you for responding with enthusiasm! 🙂
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Likewise! As always, it was my pleasure 🙂
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Wow, I had to read it twice! That’s amazing,Izza!
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Thankyou Erika! I wrote a bit in circles though but you got the point! 😉
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Absolutely. I think right the circles make the magic!
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Agreed! 🙂
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😊
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This was quite inspiring and motivational! A great one.
Wishing you a very good day.
-Naima
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Thankyou Naima! A tale to learn a lesson from 😛 you too have a great day ❤
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Izza, this is fantastic. I love it.
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Thankyou Ainne 🙂 Means a lot ❤
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You “Tale” is great. It has a wonderful rhythm and feeling to it. The perfect thing to read with my morning coffee. Cheers . =)
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Really? I am happy that you can enjoy my post with coffee 🙂 Toasts 🙂
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Lovely poem Izza. Great work in there!:)
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Thanks shruti. .Though I am impatiently waiting for your next post 🙂
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Oh, really?
Okay, then!
I’m nervous now but I will write something today:)
I can’t believe this. Lots of love, Izza:)
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Oh please you are far a legend from me.but I have this habit of talking in riddles in my blogs that has to stop seeing you conveying such impressive thoughts in a post. .Much love! Xx
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I am in love with your writing, already. This poem is exceptional and very intelligent. Loved it. 🙂
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Awesome! I loved how each line tied into the next. Well done! Peace ~M
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Thankyou Matthew..I am happy that you liked it 🙂
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Your writing is really of a different level. Brilliant way of writing a TALE 🙂
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So you got the poem now after reading twice? Thank you dashith 🙂
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Twice? Make it double digits 😛 Welcome Izza 😉
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Haha my goodness! good good 🙂
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Believe all you want 😛 Good day!!
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Wow!! What a playing with words…. Amazing Izza!! 🙂
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Really. .thanks a ton. Your comments matter 🙂
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Pleasure is all mine, my dear 🙂
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Really. .thanks a ton. Your comments matter 🙂
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👍👍👍👍
Simply amazing poem!
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Thankyou Eva 😍😘😘
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You are most welcome! Really I loved the style of your poem! 💗✌
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😗😍😍
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great words 🙂
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Thanks Leyla for the appreciation 🙂
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Wow..!!!
Good one..!! 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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You write really wonderful
and really happy connecting !! 🙂
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Thank you so much for the kind words 🙂 and the feelings are mutual 🙂
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🙂
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Just dropped by to say hello
See you on the other side of creativity
As Sheldon Always
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