Moon : “I believe I am over thinking a lot lately. Maybe, because they all keep on telling me, how ugly I am and how much they loathe my sight. They call me a pathetic excuse of an insane dark. Do you think it’s my fault? I just want them to be friends with experience and reality. Is it bad that I want the best to happen to them? You know how much I feel guilty when they shed tears from the pain I cause them, though it’s intentional but logically, sort of in best of their interests and then later I am pretty sure ,they ‘ll thank me but still…… “
Sun: “Just Relax! I promise to come back tomorrow with new bright morning and a better tomorrow, till then let your darkness bring out the best in them. Don’t blame your features blackness and shadow for causing sorrows and dismay all over. You know in your heart right? You want them to learn from the ashes they have made of themselves, and rise like a phoenix. Give them time for adaptation in the world of fittest. If they are still weary from disgust leave them be, at the end it was them not you. “
(Just don’t be afraid of darkness people.It can surely help us all sense the change in us”..So just take a chill and a deep breath :p )
A wonderful thought..!!!
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Thanks Samjoth for appreciating 🙂
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I am more than happy for the same 🙂
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Reblogged this on Priya Jivrajani.
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thanks Priya ❤
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It’s my pleasure! 🙂
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❤
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Seriously Izza it was beautiful and usually we just need someone to blame for our own mistakes but blaming someone doesn’t make that someone the culprit !! 😉 Awesome !!
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Ok I get it Darshith 🙂 thanks for the feedback 🙂
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A brilliant idea for a dialogue. Well done. Perhaps you could contemplate (for the future) a similar dialogue between a dream vs reality?????? Again. Nice writing. 🙂
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Woohoo..This calls for a cheer 🙂 Don’t think be inept .it is just that your comment was what i was looking forward to Colin 🙂 and I wrote about Dream and Reality the other day gonna post it soon 🙂
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my intuition never fails …..but are you sure she’s dark? I will not cry ! But thank you for your kindness are you going to make me a heroine in the future? so you better stop now because it is written. I will become great because of you. I won’t shed a tear everything happens for a reason.
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haha you are a strong independent person franz :)Yeah! That’s the spirit and what I was hoping to say it in here…Take care..Lots of love! xx
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sorry… If I do that I just have a feeling that something is not right . Sometimes, I’m too blunt, direct and too honest . I can’t change the way I am i treasure you as my true friend and i want you to be just who you are. To shine at your brightest with that special gift that you uniquely posses. I just want our friendship to have a true meaning that’s all.
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I want that too.Thank you so much for considering me a good friend. Honestly is what i admire most about my friends 🙂 Take care.. Lots of blessings
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thanks, Izza it breaks my heart hurting someone I can’t sleep there’s a nagging feeling in my head. My concience hurts the reason why I am a very sensitive soul.I would rather hurt myself instead.
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I hope you stay happy always and don’t say that A beautiful soul like you can’t hurt anybody! Lots of love! xx
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I always hurt someone and it hurt me so bad ….whether we like it or not we can always hurt just what I did to you unknowingly or knowingly.
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You didn’t do anything!Just believe me when i am saying you are a great person and just dont fret..Get a choco shake..you’ll thank me for the idea ❤
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is there something going on? I’m isolated you know that. But thank you for lifting my spirit lol
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A thought well expressed!
Bad times teach us, break us and rate us. How we respond to such circumstances is what makes us!
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What a rhyme Hargun ❤ Seriously! this was what I wanted to convey people to just remain staunch during all such turmoils and that will help them surplus every hurdle 🙂
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Yep,Very true!
Thanks Izza 🙂
Keep writing- keep smiling!
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I wish the same for you! :*
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Wonderully written.
I love the moon teheee ^_^
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Thanks B 🙂 Sun is good no ? 😛
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Mooon, Izza
Moooon -.- lol
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Haha okay moon lady :p
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But I love moon! 😀
So lovely and symbolic.
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haha! Ya but Moon was a bit whiny ?:P
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Hehe. Yeah! But you wanted to convey a message and moon is okay with a tag of a whiner for a short period of time 😉
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haha! ya top notch baat ki ha app ne 😀
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Hehe 😛
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Perfect!
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Thanks Love! ❤
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Wow!! What a beautiful thought and you put it awesomely… Good and bad are two sides of the coin however, how we deal with it is what our true selves 🙂 Loved it!! 🙂
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You are so true.. Only speaking verbally about bad times and crying over them don’t solve it till we take so action and make it work..Thanks you always Nims for the feedback 🙂 ❤
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Oh my god that what awesome. How did you do that? Today i seriously want to know the secret of your beautiful works. ❤ 🙂
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hahaha! Write about anything that comes to your mind and don’t think of it as stupid 😛
But really means a ton Sulagno..you are too kind 🙂
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aaawww did i realy mean to you soo much dear 🙂 even i didnt come to know how my simple words make others get impressed 😛 thank you from my side as well 🙂
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lol 😛 Yeah a good friend always means to me 🙂 take care 🙂
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you take care too my dear ❤
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Breathing right now… *sigh*
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Audrey! haha ..Thankyou for the feedback honey 🙂
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Interesting and well written piece
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Thankyou..Good to see you here 🙂
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Wonderfully expressed metaphor! Moved me.
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Erika Erika!Thank a million..Your comments do make my day ❤
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Awh, thank you… your lovely reply make my day 😀
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The feelings are mutual ❤
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I love moon and the dark! ❤
Very creative idea for the conversation.
Blessings,
-Naima
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But now you ll also be loving the dawn *I dream of that day * 🙂
Thankyou for admiring lol it was just a random thought I had so jotted it down 😛
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I love the dawn already and the colors in the sky at that time. But moon is sheer beauty and I absolutely adore it (like a lot).
-Naima
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You gave a new spin to positivity!
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Woo really 😛 then this calls for a toast Prajakta..When I was writing it ..I was not sure it ‘ll turn out to be a positive one..But I hope we all get a bit more positive in life 🙂
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Wonderful, Izza! I love them both, actually. 🙂
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Thankyou Eva ❤ Means a ton ❤
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always pleasure. I like to use nature in my writing, and talk in their characters…. thumbs up, dear! 🙂
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May God bless you ❤
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Ameen! The same be for you! ❤
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That’s seriously amazing, I loved the whole dialogue and the message was wonderful and it was delivered in a very beautiful and intresting way, short too, which makes you a great writer 🙂 🙂 and this really made me think about something I never though of 🙂 keep blogging and making wonders 🙂 🙂 Good luck Izzzy
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thankyou salwa… i am so glad you liked it 🙂 was keeping your advising in mind 😛
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Wonderful! Very deep thinking!
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Thanks Nico..I am a deep deep person 😛
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Brilliant concept 🙂
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Wow! This one is perfection. Now, I am asking you, how do you do it? A beautiful and inspiring message.
I will be reblogging this. 🙂
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This is beautiful. 🙂
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so wonderful and beautiful,… nicely done, thank you… Michelle
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Haunting. Exactly what I needed to read at this moment in time. Thank you!
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I love the moon. Aww and i felt the emotions and the hurt in the moon. You made the sun and moon complement each other, with the sun building up the moon when it felt low. Well done Izza, 👏
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“Jab gham ka andhera ghir aaye, samjho ke savera door nahin…
Har rat ka hai anjaam yehi, taarey bhi yahi dohraate hain”
I’ll bore you with verses. 😀 😛
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Thanks himanshu for stopping by :p I thought you never would. You are good with shairi so I won’t be bored 🙂
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I love the sun and the moon,the play between the lite and the dark,great work,I love how your always saying positive remarks with your comments,how you love my work it makes me want to dance and sing when I connect with someone,this is what it’s all about,would you like a comment from someone saying (I like it but I don’t get it)it’s like I pour myself into my words,it can take me over an hour for a rough draft,it’s the heart and soul of who I am
Many blessings and peace
Keep reading for I shall write
As always Sheldon
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Sheldon thanks alot and you pour your heart out and that’s what we have in common :p it’s so great to read your posts and thank you soo much for sharing your thoughts but please a request : you have to reply to your posts because I ll comment 😀 and I am waiting for your next post 🙂 for I shall keep reading 🙂 God bless ☺☺
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I am pulling out all the stops
Like I said when some says they like what they have read you say thank you
So I want you to know how special it means to me that you are always there
So a huge thank you
And maybe a hug
As always Sheldon
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Ok thanks you said it in such a sweet way and I am all happy 🙂 sorry for assuming that you are introvert lol 🙂
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Wonderful reflections.
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Thankyouuuu so much for the follow back 🙂
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You welcome Izza.Have a wonderful weekend
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You nailed it in just 12 lines, impressed 🙂
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Thank you thank you 🙂
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I think there is a bit of a love affair between the sun and the moon. Maybe they tell us what time it is.
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Beautiful depiction! *smiles*
~ Rahul
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Thanks Rahul for taking out time 🙂
means alot
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You’re most welcome, Izza! Have a good day. 🙂
~ Rahul
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I can see your words being put to music 🙂
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Really? ? one can try though :p
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Such a beautiful message and I absolutely love the picture. Melting yellow ❤
Anand
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I relish, cause I found just what I used to be taking a look
for. You have ended my four day lengthy hunt! God Bless you man. Have a nice day.
Bye
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